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arrow-up153arrow-down1external-linkChief of S Korea's high-stakes exam quits over 'insane' English testwww.bbc.comLee Duna@lemmy.nz to World News@lemmy.worldEnglish · 3 天前message-square7fedilink
minus-squareZahtu@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up23·edit-23 天前goddamn, those sentences are awful. i dont know whether its because they are from an US-american english text rather than a british one or whether its the authors way oft writing, but judging reading comprehension with this is nuts.
minus-squaredeadbeef79000@lemmy.nzlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up17·3 天前 The above passage, for example, comes from Game Feel, a game design guide written by Steve Swink. Steve Swink (and his editors) needs to be forced fed a copy of his book. Being able to design games doesn’t mean one can write about designing games.
minus-squareMister Neon@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·3 天前I’m an American born and raised. I couldn’t get that sentence in a paragraph question to save my life.
minus-squarek0e3@lemmy.calinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·3 天前I feel like it would have been better to let AI write it as the passage would benefit from using some em dashes. It’s so poorly written.
goddamn, those sentences are awful. i dont know whether its because they are from an US-american english text rather than a british one or whether its the authors way oft writing, but judging reading comprehension with this is nuts.
Steve Swink (and his editors) needs to be forced fed a copy of his book.
Being able to design games doesn’t mean one can write about designing games.
I’m an American born and raised. I couldn’t get that sentence in a paragraph question to save my life.
I feel like it would have been better to let AI write it as the passage would benefit from using some em dashes. It’s so poorly written.